Salvador
Lopez
Professor
Baer
English
5A
10/10/14
Project 2 Draft Revision
I recently wrote my Project 2 draft
on the injustice in education. After reading certain articles in the “From
Inquiry to Academic Writing” text book made me realize that some students education
does get abused by others. I knew after reading Kozol’s essay “From still
separate, still unequal” that others do abuse student’s education just for
their race. In addition, after writing my draft on injustice in Education I
shared my draft to some of my colleagues; my colleagues gave me some feedback
that would really help in the future. They helped me in fixing up some
sentences that wouldn’t make sense over one word; my colleagues also helped me
in restructuring my sentences to make them sound professional. The comments
they leave me really help me towards future assignments that I work on. I try
to perfect my writing, but I know that I will always have those mistakes in my
writing. I’m glad I can share my writing to my colleagues because they help me
find mistakes that need to better my writing. These workshops that are set up
in class really help me out, I hope we don’t stop because getting feedback by
others really help me in future assignments.
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