Project 2 Topic

Salvador Lopez

Professor Baer

English 5B

MWF English 5B

Project 2 topic

For my project 2 topic i am still indecisive on what i want to talk about. However, I have favored the topic on how the U.S is on hold while other countries are rising. I want to talk about how other developing countries are professing as a country. I want to talk about other countries improving economically, electronically, and how their culture is also improving. Then, compare on how the U.S has not provided any drastic progressions. The U.S has made little improvements here and there but they haven't proven they are not the Supreme Power lately. 

Source Citation for Project 2

Salvador Lopez

Professor Baer

English 5B

MWF 12:00- 12:50PM

Source Citation for Project 2

I am still kind of indecisive about my Project 2. I have had a few ideas regarding my topics for Project 2 but i came across his article regarding human trafficking. This article was found on the U.S Immigration and Customs Enforcement, it was called Human Trafficking a global problem. This article is basically informing everyone of what Human trafficking is. Human trafficking is a problem through out the entire world. Each country or state has their own laws regarding human trafficking. ICE is dedicated to stop human trafficking. They know it is a big deal and want it to stop. They know a lot of children pay others to illegally transport them to the United States of America and they usually have to repay their debts in forced labor. Some children are being forced to have sexual intercourse with strangers for money. They have stories in which people are being charged for forcing others to traffic themselves. They also give examples in which people were brought from Africa or Mexico and were forced to be prostitutes. This article really makes me look more into Human Trafficking since it sounds quite interesting to me. It is a global issue that is not just in the U.S but many more countries. 

U.S Immigration and Customs Enforcement. (2015). Retrieved from http://www.ice.gov/human-trafficking (Web.)

Zakaria’s and Friedman’s arguments

Salvador Lopez

Professor Baer

English 5B

MWF 12:00-12:50PM

 Fareed Zakaria's and Thomas L. Friedmans arguments 

After reading both excerpts i felt like they were both interesting. I like it when certain articles, excerpts, letters, etc. talk about our country. It expands my learning when it comes to the U.S. Both excerpts were talking about the U.S and including other countries and that is what i like. Once you talk about the country i live in i give it my undivided attention. Therefore, i was really interested and enjoyed reading both excerpts from Fareed Zakaria and Thomas L. Friedman. However, i happened to find Zakarias excerpt more interesting. 

For instance i found that Zakaria was more persuasive in her article. I felt like using the 3 tectonic power shifts really showed a lot. It really gave me something to imagine. For example, the first shift was "The Rise of the Western World" it really helped me imagine everything being set up for the second shift. The first shift to me was an example of everything being prepared for the upcoming shift. Then the second power shift was "Rise of the United States" i totally imagined this right away since i know a lot of things from history. I imagined the U.S to be a power house. More like a big brother to all the other countries that were not as big as the U.S. Then that all suddenly changed when the third shift went in. That was "the rise of the rest". i did not even have to read along more because i knew what it was about. I never realized this until i read the third power shifts name. I have witnessed other countries grow out of what they used to be. They are not noticed but they are rising. The United States has been on hold for the last couple of decades. They have not risen any greater of what they were before. We can easily compare their electronics, culture, science, and politics to another country such as china. They even beat us in half the things. That is not what a superior country does? They can't be compared to another country they have to prove its dominance and sadly the U.S is not doing that.
In addition, Friedmans article wasn't persuasive enough for me like Zakarias. For example, Zakaria hit us with 3 main tectonic power shifts while Friedman would go back in forth with the Colombus expedition. I did not like how he would go back in forth with Colombus and the real world. I don't feel like Colombus's trip was that credible in order to compare it to the real world we live in today. He was going somewhere about India being very upgraded and the people they have in business, but i just feel like he should have shared to us reasons on how the U.S is stuck in time. I would have been persuaded more if Friedman had used the U.S before using India. I felt like giving us a brief overview of how America is and compared it to India would have been much better. 

In conclusion, i feel as if Zakarias writing is more persuasive since i can have examples for many ideas he can make. I witness a lot of things and see what his claims are tied to. I know this country is at stake of losing its supreme power, but I hope this country improves. I hope this country can get off hold and go back to work.